1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
www: You start an music industry giving a clear example-Justin Bieber. more of this please.
EBI: careful- I don't believe you revised properly.You need to deal with each industry as a clear paragraph.Your work doesn't make sense all the time and is very basic/underdeveloped with hardly any media terminology.
2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:
Q1)1
Q2)0
Q3)2
Q4) 4
3)On my assessment I didn't get any media terminology wrong since i used basic key words. The words I used where there was needed it was correct for example using the words connotation and denotation but in my assessment i could of added more key media terminology.
4) In question 3 I think I did good in my preferred reading since I explained the advert in the question unlike in my oppositional reading where i was confused and stuck on the question.
5)For question 3 I was a bit confused and didn't know what to write about and I didn't write about.
The preferred reading is women are portrayed as subversive.
This is shown in the facial expression and pose. The women is shown as being
tough and strong.
The oppositional reading is women could be offended by it.
This is because they might think the woman are acting like men’s when there doing men's certain jobs which means
looking like a man, wearing work clothes and covering your hair.