Tuesday, December 18, 2018

LR to essay

In conclusion my essay has shown me that the internet has a lot of negative and positive sides.The positive change of the internet might have been useful since you could upload a footage globally and gain fame by self promoting yourself and there is a negative change of the internet might be useless since there is too many competition and your footage may not be seen.The audience have more power in the internet since they can share their idea's and opinions online for everyone else to view.


3) What was your strongest paragraph? My third paragraph is my strongest paragraph since it's talking about media advantages and disadvantag
es which is answering the question "the internet has given audiences much more power than ever before."to what extent do you agree with this statement? 

4) What was your weakest paragraph? My weakest paragraph is my last paragraph which i have improved look above.It doesn't make sense and there was a lot of grammar mistake which i have completed. 

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