Statement of Intent: Feedback and learner response

1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI.
WWW:Some very good basic intentions explained and some links and mention of the brief.EBI: Re-read the brief carefully and make sure you have commented on each section.
  2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative? Why?
I do need to make changes as i haven't mention that much narrative.I'm going to add some fast pace action of the young teenager getting chased by the group of bullies and i will add some music in the background yo create tension.

3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your Statement of Intent?
I can go back to my statement and improve my sentences to make it better.I will use better media terminology in my statement and i'll answer the question carefully. 

4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next draft?
I will reinforce the stereotype by keeping the main character a young teenager and the advert group of bullies predominant.The young teenager getting bullied is a stereotype however if i still use the young teenager who's getting bullied i'm reinforcing the stereotype of him being weak.

5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target audience (14-18 year olds) enjoy your advert?
14-18 year old audiences love action movies, so if i add some action to my advert i will attract other teenagers to watch my advert and to enjoy it and also teenagers love funny videos so i might add some funny clips in my advert to attract my viewers.